My Services
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Query Letter Review
The query letter is a key part of the author journey—but we all get too close to our writing. It’s hard to know if it’s as strong as it could be! As a published author of four novels, and with 20+ years of experience in marketing, copywriting and storytelling, I know how to craft a pitch, and I know how to sell.
I’ll go through line by line to make sure you’re telling the story you want to tell. This service includes two passes of your query letter with in-depth edits and comments.
CA$150.00
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Full Manuscript Assessment
A full manuscript assessment is perfect for writers who are looking for high-level feedback on their entire novel. If you aren’t sure what’s working and what isn’t, I will provide you with a thorough critique of your novel with actionable feedback.
Once I read through your manuscript, I’ll identify the strengths, as well as offer suggestions for improvement. With each evaluation, I bring my experience as an author of four published novels, plus 20+ years in professional writing and storytelling.
Services include a detailed edit letter with my feedback, as well as general comments left in the manuscript (no in-line edits), followed by a one-hour online meeting to talk about any questions.
CA$800.00
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Manuscript Assessment: First 50 Pages
This manuscript assessment is perfect for you if you’re looking for high-level feedback on the first 50 pages of your novel.
I’ll read through your pages, provide you with a thorough critique and actionable feedback, delivered in an edit letter. The services included are the same as the manuscript assessment, only on your first 50 pages.
As with all my work, I bring my experience as an author of four published novels, my experience working with multiple publishers and editors, and my 20+ years in professional writing and storytelling.
CA$400.00
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Manuscript Assessment: Opening Pages
Nailing the opening of your manuscript is key to catching the eye of agents and editors, as well as readers.
I’ll read through the first 20 pages of your manuscript, provide you with a thorough critique and actionable feedback, delivered in an edit letter. This will give you a solid direction on how to make the opening of your novel as enticing as it can be.
CA$200.00
Testimonials
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Heather helped identify structural issues, tightened pacing and helped me deepen character connections through her assessment document in a way that is professional, respectful, and transformational. The feedback she provided was clear, insightful, and most importantly actionable which made the revision process manageable and exciting rather than daunting. My manuscript is stronger, more cohesive, and more compelling thanks to her input. If you are looking for an editor who understands the craft of storytelling and who cares about your work, I highly recommend working with Heather.
Georgina Kelly, Author
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Working with Heather was a truly rewarding experience. Her assessment was thoughtful, clear, and filled with insights that respected the heart of the story while offering ways to strengthen it. Heather helped me see where deeper emotional connection was needed—especially in shifting POVs and key moments where characters’ interior thoughts could be more fully explored. Her notes on clarity around character motivations were incredibly helpful in making the story more accessible without losing its richness. Heather's feedback was both kind and constructive, and gave me the confidence to move forward. I highly recommend her to anyone looking for a professional, compassionate editor.
Tracy Houle, Author and Lifestyle and Wellness Coach
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That's a damn good query letter!
Bianca Marais, Bestselling Author and Podcast Host, from the podcast interview “Getting Published Without an Agent” on The Shit No One Tells You About Writing